Ayushi Jain

In your happiest dream

Welcome to my imaginary world!💜

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nice approach.

The storyline is good. Space is needed in between the paragraphs. there were a few typos. A few improvements, and the story will be amazing. keep up the good work. :)

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I like it!

It's a suspense thriller!! I like. Can't wait to know what happens next!!

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Amazing 💜

It's an amazing book. Really, words are not enough to describe what this story has to offer.
It has given me some heart wrenching moments... Hating how some foul humans exist but it has given me hope to... That there are good people too, people like Killian.
Matty deserves all the love in this world, I sometimes want to hide him in my pocket!

***SPOILER***
I have a special place in my heart for Jonah. Oh, such a sweet soul. You know, I love Matty and Killian they're my favorite but I do hope there is a universe where Killian and Jonah get their happy ending and Skylar is there to celebrate all their moments with them.
(I teared up just at the thought...)

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Amazing!

I started reading and just fell in love with this book. The writing style is so beautiful. The way the author describes the scenes, ah-mah-zing! teach me too please. The way every single detail of anything the characters are doing is taken into account, it's mind blowing. Sarah and Max started so good. The blooming of a pure bond that I see warms my heart. They are my precious book nerds now. 🤭
This story is a breath of fresh air for me.
I recommend this book to everyone. It's amazing and you won't regret reading it.

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Amazing!

I find the book sooooooo cute. I was really curious when I saw the first two chapters. The small intros of the lovely girls. I am loving it already. Keep up the good work! Happy Writing!

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I love it!

The author never disappoints me. Pick any of her books and you will be definitely impressed. The writing style is so appealing. It attracts the readers and you could feel each and every emotion of the characters as if they're your own.
Love this book soooo much!

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Love it!!

I absolutely love this story. I am so so soooo impressed by the author's writing style. All the details and the way you describe the emotions of the characters, I love it. This is something I can learn from you.
I would recommend everyone to read this amazing book.
Good work author!!

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Interesting

This story is very different from the ones I've read so far. I am quite enjoying the it. I am always curious to know what happens in the next chapter.
I am impressed by the writing style here.
I would definitely recommend everyone to read this story.
Good work.

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Ah-mah-zing!!!!

This book is truly amazing!! The concept is unique and I love the author's writing style!! Every chapter keeps you on your toes... An amazing book by an amazing author!!

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My heart is so full with love.

This is the sweetest, cutest and loveliest book I've ever read. The characters are relatable. The author's writing style- perfect. Emotions are so clear in this book. It made me smile, made cry, made me go all aww. I love this book. Perfect. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

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I like this story

I'm very impressed with the first chapter. You elaborated everything properly. There were some minor grammatical mistakes, otherwise it was good. I would suggest you to give some space in between the paragraphs though, it increases the readability.
A pretty good book.
keep up the good work. :)

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A very different approach. Love it!

A unique plot. An Alpha getting bullied? Oh dear. It's different from the classic werewolf stories. I'm so interested to see where this story takes us.
I like the writing style of the author. From the first chapter, I can say that the book will be a breeze of fresh air. Good work author.😊

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Nice work Author!

I love this book soooo so much! I like Juliette so much. She's so cute. I like Zachary too but damn he was so rude in the beginning. This book made "Aww", "how dare he!", "Poor Julie", "baahahahahaha". I would recommend everyone to read this book.

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In love with it already.

The story idea is unique. I love the writing style of the author. It is a must read book. The story is described so beautifully. When you read the story, you can tell that the writers technical writing skills are strong. This author never disappointed me in any of her stories. It's a beautiful fantasy novel. Absolutely love it.

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