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Forbidden mates

"I love this book i enjoy reading this book!"

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Forbidden mates

"The books really good i really enjoyed it dont want to spoil but anna is a really amazing queen i wonder if Lucas pack wil join the vampires the only pain in the ass was Jonathan "

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Love it

"I like it so much..it's something new..different"

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Great story

"Great writing "

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Great story!

" Love the story line! "

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Forbidden mates

"This was pretty interesting I enjoy it... thank you"

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Wolf abd vampire

"Thus is the first time i have read anything like thus"

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Jkel

"Good plot, I'm liking it"

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Hshrhdjj DHS

"I love it I love Anna and love the vampire and wolf "

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Wild

"I love this book can't wait for more "

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Forbidden mates

"Love it šŸ˜ "

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Forbidden mates

"I’m very proud of you great story try spell check before submitting it. But great story love it"

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Okay

"Book is good you have a lot of Grammer error tho that makes it hard to read "

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I'm Loving This

"I love this and I have added this to my reading list! I have read it twice now, still love it, I see you have some small grammer mistakes but so do I, All up i love the book and where it is going!"

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Forbidden Mates

"Really good story so far! There are a few spelling and grammatical errors, but we all make them sometimes. It's really engaging and has a really cool plot! Keep it up!"

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Forbidden mates

"Great start to a book with serious potential, love the idea of the story and the characters. Needs a little grammar and punctuation check overall but it is a very good read and I recommend it 100%"

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Forbidden mate

"Kept me on edge. "

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Blood mate

"Yes this story is great. Love how the wolves and vampire emerge together! I would recomend this story and i hope to find more from this author. The way it all ties together is awesome"

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Fix Grammar and Spelling Please

"I love the story and everything, but the grammar and spelling suck. It really distracts from the story overall. Would give it a five if this was fixed. I mean, it can't be that hard to proofread. Still a good story though. "

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Potential high!

"I had trouble getting into it at first since it was a little bumpy, but just a few fixes here and there would absolutely make this story! It seems lazy up until you reach the third chapter, and you can tell the author's true colors show! I wouldn't mind reading more as everything comes alive!"

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