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Wonderous

"The Plot is great, It’s has nice romantic vibes, beautiful betrayal and great Horror elements! Love it"

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under the bloodletting moon

"well my friend. for what started at a slow burn if finally came to light. it was based on an oldie but goody, but who doesnt like a good vamp story? loved and hated the characters, they finally came to life for me. Although the split story was bothersome for me but then they connected, explained about wilford. all in all it turned out to be a great story. this was the last read for me of all your stories, I hope to see more in the near future. thank you for sharing."

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Unfer the bloodletting moon

"Very good job"

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Nasty Vampires

"As always your story was well written and a pleasure to read. A slow start but this only helped developing the characters and in determining if you liked or disliked them. So much death, sadness, anger, and innocents lost. I hate when children and the innocent suffer because of evil but that is part of life in the supernatural. I found the way they killed the vampires a little extreme, but also understand they wanted to make sure that they were indeed dead. I couldn't wait until Carlton was destroyed and hoped that his death would set things right but things never happen the way we want. Great story from start to finish. Great ending. can't wait for the sequel. :)"

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The bloodletting moon

"Nail biting events. I couldn't finish reading the part staking Grace's heart, without my own heart pounding. Such a flawless style. Hope Barnett can solve this. Hope David, William, Stuart, Barnett and all others stay safe and sound. I felt so engrossed in the stories that i thought these were happening just before my very eyes. I wonder if you wrote this in the dark, for i suspect i would have fainted on writing and reading it. You have done a great job, the detailing of the encounter between the victims and vampires are mindblowing. Wishes to you Author. Hope everything settles well enough. "

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☆☆☆☆☆

"I really enjoyed your writting style - introduction of characters, layout of their lives and description of scenes. I like the storyline development pace and how you fluidly change between characters and scenes."

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Good plot

"Really liked this this booked, keeps me on my toes,also plot is good you can follow the storyline. "

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The book is not that scary but it is fun to read

"I love this book I am enjoying it so far"

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