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Good Concept
"I like the concept behind the story. Taking everyday life experiences and turning them into a story takes effort. Doing so and keeping the readers attention takes even more. The story gives an interesting insight and feel of someone living everyday life, with the emotion clearly showing. Especially as the story grows longer. Some grammer and punctuation need work, but otherwise it's a nice story. Keep up the work in progress! "
Krampus’ Review
"I like the perspective and idea, I would like to see more because I don’t quite understand the story yet. That might just be me. "
