Customize readability
Aa

A Frozen Urn

All Rights Reserved ©

Summary

The feeling of holding onto old emotions but wanting to let go as the seasons change. A feeling of outer thaw but inner ice.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

An Ode To

I’ve an empty vessel

But I hold onto my pains

Like the last vestiges of winter

What melts within me

That I can no longer preserve

Siphons to my clay chamber

Then leaks out.

A forgotten crack found

And the ice no longer seals

As the hinterland thaws,

In a frost quake.

My soul tremors from the thaw and not the ice.

The liquid mixes with clay

Making the vessel new again

Only to turn it sanguine

And seeping.

Will this feeling linger

Or will I forever pour out

And discover new flaws,

In my cool clay

Free of sensation,

Wherever I lay,

My head weeping.

Let Katie Smolkovich know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

0

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

0

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

author

I smell talent, good chapter, if you plan to write more, or update, please let me know. Thank you

7 years

Further Recommendations

Just Another Love Story

Tarun: A must read story for every couple❣️.....i was crying at the end🙁.....but its the best story ...😍😇.....

Read Now
Please Hear My Cry

Child_of _God: Very detailed and personal. Really delves deep into understanding😉

Read Now
Blue Dreams

gettexh21: Hello! I’m Falica, a webtoon/manga artist excited by strong storytelling.If you need a comic version of your story, I can make that happen affordably!Discord: falica_spicer82Instagram: falanzero5

Read Now
TIARA : A Search for Princess

Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...

Read Now
Desire's Dilemma - Elizabeth's Story

Sienna Hayes : Hi, I’m Sienna! I read your story and I really liked it. While reading it, I was already imagining the scenes as visuals in my mind. I would love to adapt your story into comic art. I’m really passionate about creating comics, especially adapting stories into visual form. Your story could look amazi...

Read Now
Pleasure is pain

Elouise33: I loved this short story. One spicy chapter was all it needed to leave me wanting more.

Read Now
Negeri Hari Esok (COMPLETED)

Saraa: Your story has become one of my favorites. I love how you developed the characters over time. Are you already working on another story, or do you have any ideas for future projects?

Read Now
Caine

Miriam0011: It was a pleasure reading and analyzing your writing you’re doing fantastic work. It’s always motivating to see such creativity. Are you working on a story these days?

Read Now
Trailer Park Girl | A Novella| Completed

Miriam0011: Hey , hope you're having a great week! I've been following your work for a bit now and honestly, your latest pieces have been amazing. The way you hook the reader is great. Quick question for you: do you have a specific routine that helps you get into the creative zone, or do you just write whenever...

Read Now