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What is your opinion?
Wonderful
"The word choice the author uses makes the chapters 'beautiful.' I love it! :)"
Riptide
"Riptide is the story of a gifted young student who suffers an accident that puts her life in danger. The treatment saves her life and grants her superpowers. During the treatment the writer refers to a doss instead of a dose, but does it so frequently one wonders if it was written this way on purpose. Tusitala is a very talented writer that, in my opinion, needs a bit more time and practice to make her writing and storytelling shine! But, then again, don't we all?"
