surprisingly good

"when I saw you had written 57 stories, I thought there's no way any of this will be good. She must've rushed through. But clearly not. I'd say you're a very talented author. Your style is okay, the story's not perfect, it could have some improvements. I noticed you had the right amount of dialogue and describing detail. However, try to make the characters have unique personalities that no one on planet Earth in real life would have. Maybe someone goofy, someone smart, think sitcom-wise for your stories, or if you're writing drama, think about family drama."