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Hell: Now Improved!

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Summary

Hell has been very punishing, so the angles are working to make it a city. Everyone gets a second chance. But with a few conditions...

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue

Hell looked terrible. It was a gloomy red landscape with rocks everywhere. The rocks were a glowing GREEN color with black stuff oozing out. There were random BLUE fires going on. How could I get the Hell members to pay attention to what I had to say? I noticed a large rock. It wasn't green, it was black. Guess the ooz covered it up. . It used my small wings to fly up to it. I flew to the top.

I stepped onto the top of the rock. Pay attention, demons! I cleared my throat loudly. "I have been thinking about this for a while...and..I think you all deserve a second chance." I paused, just so they could process that. I looked down at the demons, they were murmuring.

"What? Did I hear right?"

"Another chance!"

"Stupid snobby angel.."

That really hurt! I refused to listen after that comment. " You see this...red gloomy landscape, us angels will work to fix it. We want to improve your...deaths. We just ask for one thing. With this new chance, don't make it a repeat of your previous lives. What ever got you here, don't do it. Please be a good citizen." I paused.

"That's it?" I heard a whisper.

"Oh, and also you have to do a daily punishment!" That's when the groan came. " They will vary depending on who you are." I added. Hell, is about to be fixed.

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