Super cute!

"That was a super cute start!! I loved Claire! I love that her personality was so distinct! She’s confident and feisty! Your descriptions were well done. Set the wedding atmosphere so nicely! I mostly appreciate how realistic the dialogue was though. I could totally see that conversation happening in real life! Plus, Paul sounds like a total hottie with a big heart! Wife, kids, then sailing??! Sign me up. Totally loved that last pirate line, too. It fit well with the running theme in this chapter with the kraken tattoo and the sailing! Can’t wait to read more! "