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Amazing!

"This is honestly a very good book! "

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Love the idea, not a fan of 1st person

"I love Zutara and so was very pleased to find a Zutara ship here on Inkitt. I liked this first chapter and will definitely continue reading. My one complaint isn't with the story itself but rather the narrative. I'm not a big fan of first person narrative. I might be alone in this, but I feel it makes characters sound self-centered because everything is always "I saw", "I thought", "I did". Its a spam of I, Me, My and it just irritates me. But not enough to prevent me from enjoying your story."

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