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Great

"found myself getting more interested the further I read. It definitely grows on you."

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Amazing

"Amazing as the first book! Thanks for sharing"

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Great

"It's a long story, took me a while to finish it. Which is a good thing. And damn. There is a lot to cover but I have other things to do. So I'll shorten my review. The characters are spectacular, the writing style is smooth, and the emotions are just flying everywhere. Love it. "

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Quade series book 2

"Wonderful, love it, couldn't put it down , got a real connection to the characters. Like family. Still think these books should be a film or mini series. Xx "

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AMAZING

"Amazing book, again. Can not wait for the next one. Love all your stories!!!"

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next

"It was the best read i have had for a long time.."

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Quade family series book 2

"Hated the way this book ended like I was looking for the next chapter. Hope I can find book 3 can’t stop reading these books. "

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Great Read

"Love your books , I hope you continue with more of the Quade family series ,, Looking forward to reading more ..."

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Next Quade book 2

"Mystery Thriller or Suspense, take your pick. The author knows how to build a plot. Character development is good, and I can't wait for each chapter to be posted. Hurry up already!"

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Good!

"I think overall this book is good. I realize this is book two in a series so I kept that in mind when at points I was confused since I'm sure that's probably because I'm missing a lot of context. However, even in the summary I could tell that the plot was going to be a bit disjointed - you have a lot going on at once, seemingly not always connected and it doesn't always flow. For example, in the summary, you talk about a love interest then suddenly a case, but romance isn't even declared as one of the main genres yet it seems to be a bit plot point in the book. That was a little confusing to me because it made it difficult for me to figure out A) what the main storyline was and B) where we were at in the story at any given point. I do like the characters though and your writing style is lovely, albeit there are a couple grammar mistakes per chapter - but proofreading should help with that. My only other criticism would be that each chapter is on the longer side and then the book itself is 93 chapters - I would imagine that your average inkitt reader coming across this book is going to be a bit overwhelmed by it. I would honestly recommend splitting this into two books because, for whatever reason, people are much more willing to read two books that are ~40-50 chapters each than one book that is 90 chapters. Overall, though, I enjoyed the story! My main point of advice would be to really figure out what you're trying to say and have that be the main focus, let the other storylines eb and flow along the main one but there has to be a common thread that takes the reader from the beginning to the end so we can take something away from the story when it comes to a close. What message are you trying to give? What is the "bigger picture" so to speak? I think that needs to be more developed. Amazing work though and keep it up!"

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Next, Quade series book 2

"Great story, but, alot of errors. From calling Allana - Amanda to putting in extra words that were not necessary, to simple spelling mistakes. The plot gets a little confusing in places too. As in trying to figure out who the author is writing about at any particular time. This Author has a natural talent to write but needs a little help to make this a publishable product. "

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Next book 2 of Quade family series

"I am so into the Quade Series. I just love all the characters and the plots."

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