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Absolutely intriguing

"Absolutely adore this book, written so, so well. Couldn’t ever put my phone down. Highly recommended! 💕"

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Bfufh

"Hi I was in shock at life and 6th of me last night but then I got to go to bed early so sorry I couldn't sleep well my last night at home when you woke me and who you were and that I would be the only slept in my life and that was the reason why you didn't want me "

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Highly packed with emotions!!

"To author ❤: I'm glad you mentioned you were going to re-write this book. This was a well thought out, highly emotional, constantly changing twists of a can't-put-down book. OMG!! I cannot stand Jackson...I don't trust him. What he said to Dawn & Lillian, I just don't trust him. I feel so badly for Dawn. My eyes got watery because of her hurt & pain. Looking forward to book 2!!"

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I love reading keep up the good work

"I love reading love and romantic stories., especially when the main character ends up being happy. Honestly this story inspires me to feel better about myself, self love is the best love. I must first love myself in other to love somebody else. No matter what others may view me as I know I am a child of god and I’m worthy. I’m reading this story but I also feel like I’m in the story."

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Woah

"Woahhhh woahhhh"

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Without you

"Wow!! Feels true to life.... Emotions, the scenes, the interactions... Great writing skills... Emotionally charged characters. ❤️ "

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Its real unfortunately and its good

"Good sad though but good"

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Good book

"Want to knw what happen next"

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Without you

"This was a really good book and very emotional at times.Looking forward to reading book 2"

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Without you

"It’s amazing, I’m utterly intrigued by every chapter every time. I literally can’t put my phone down — that’s how addicting it really is"

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Dawnll

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review

"I really like the whole bad boy/good girl thing, I totally dig that! I think we just don't see why Jackson is a bad boy yet...I mean why do people think of him like that? Except for the fact that he obviously isn't serious about Dawn 😪 Also, what is wrong with her friend Tia? Please tell me karma hits her in the back sometime during this novel! Keep writing xox"

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Nour

"The story is off to a great start, and I am sure that I will stay tuned until you finish writing it. I just believe that the story might be somehow rushed. The events are falling in too quickly and it feels like some of the events are stated. Other than that, I really like the story!"

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Without You

"I really like this story so far! I really like the details the author gives about each person yet, does not ramble about useless details throughout the story. Cannot wait to read more!"

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Fantastic Coming-Of-Age!!

"Oh to be that age again! This is a great coming-of-age story of being young, awkward, and filled with hormones... can't wait to see where this heads! Good job. :) Will keep tabs on this story!!!!"

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Without You (Book 1)

"I don’t really like how it is written"

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