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Tony and the magical candybAR

Summary

this is a story about a boy who wanted to get revenge on his brother and he stumbled upon magical powers by a candy bar.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
19
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter one


Chapter 1

Once upon a time, there was a boy with black spiky hair named Tony. Tony was walking to the candy shop with his mother.

He was destined to get the new Jayzers candy bar. He had enough allowance for the new candy bar that had just came out in stores. It was made out of peanuts, corn, wheat, milk and marshmallows.

Tony and his mother made it to the store on Black Friday and he bought 100 Jayzers candy bars. When he got home he ate one of them to try it and see what they tasted like.

As he tasted it, he said “Eww! Gross. This has corn and milk in it. I hate corn and milk! But I know somebody who would love this.”

As he was eating a candy bar, he noticed on the back of the package there is a Caution label that says “CAUTION: Magic Inside. Be Careful.” Tony laughed at the ridiculous message. He knew magic wasn’t real.

After he finished his candy bar, he snuck into his big brother Nicholas’s room while he was asleep. Tony secretly put 4 of his Jayzers bars under his brother’s bed. Then he snuck out of his brother’s room and went back into his own room.





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