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Obsessed

"this the best kind of love triangle I've ever read but damn! I genuinely do not know who Justine is gonna end up with, I've connected with both characters( Jason & Clinton ) 😶 sucks to be Jesse"

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Wooooo good job

"I deeply appreciate the set up of the story and the theatrical arc had me captivated. The ending (to this book of the series?) Was not what I expected, but still satisfying. So great job there!!! Pointers: it would behoove you to read your work to catch the grammatical errors. You often use contractions when they should not be used. There are anywhere from 5 to 10 every chapter. Also sometimes your phrases are misplaced and makes the reading choppier, so if you want to edit, that would be something I would look out for. These things have handicapped your style as a writer, but anyways you're totally killing the game with your creative energy. I look forward to reading more from you and seeing your writing progress!!! "

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The Date Planner

"I just re-read this entire book...can't wait for update. He's a pretty warped character. One minute he's into her, next he's cold. "

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