What is your opinion?
Very Good
"I really like the first chapter and I believe that it’s well-written. I would suggest you shorten the paragraphs, but other than that great job! "
A nice story told in the eyes of a child
"It's a well-written story. The story told in the child's perspective gives it a splash of innocence and curiosity in the animal world. That being said, I find some of the dialogues too long to read. It would be nice to shorten them."
Very Good
"I enjoyed reading just the first chapter. This book has an enormous amount of potential. Keep writing cause your really good at it! "
Rich Agnello Worthington OH USA
"Very good use of imagination, shorten paragraphs to 4-7 sentences each to hold reader interest more."
A Great Start
"It’s a storyline that’s been covered much before— main character must save nature from industrial workers who are polluting it. However, this story introduces it in a new way. With Ana’s supernatural ability, it adds a sort of twist. There is a lot of potiental with the plot and subplots, not to mention the characters. As a side note, there’s a few techinical errors, but nothing a little editing won’t fix. Some pacing and detailing could be altered, no major issues though. Nontheless, I’m intrigued to find out what happens next."
