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Tony and the magical candybar part II

Summary

when Tony and his friends discover that they must travel to another universe his magical powers from the candybar is challenged and they must find a way home as they adventure threw this universe

Genre
Fantasy
Author
JAY PAGE
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

chapter one

Chapter 1

Tony was very frustrated but eventually he would start walking to school with his friends to play soccer though he was irritated that he had to go to San Diego to deal with Nicholas and Eddie but his cousin and his best friend Julian were behind him look “Tony it’s going to be ok” said Julian trying to cheer him up “hi boys” said Zoey walking past hey Zoey said all the boys except Tony because he was just too mad and upset to say anything but his cousin asked “why are you so upset for one and for two what time is it” “1:59” Answered Tony after finally calming down a little bit looking at his watch so they were walking to school (it was about almost five when they got there) so they waited Tony looked at his watch and it said when they looked at the clock at the top of the school they said “it’s almost five dang we didn’t take that long just to walk to school for sports” said everyone “you only have another minute before the sports bell” said Zoey walking past again “Wait how do you know?” Julian asked “i looked at the schedule I play Volleyball and it starts at the sametime as Soccer” she answered while he looked at his watch and then the bell for sports rang so Tony and his friends went to play soccer and coach Albans the gym teacher said “oh! You boys are on time today?” “yes we are sir” said the boys Tony was just getting his cleats on when coach said Tony come on down to receive his medal before the game but the other coach said “dude the game just started we can’t give them the medals yet” “yeah coach you can’t give out the medals yet” said Tony so they started playing. of course Tony had kicked a game winning goal then that’s when some kid from the other team (the other school) triped Tony after the game. Then Tony got up and said “dude what’s your problem it’s just a game” then the kid said “my problem is you’re too good” that very next day at school that same kid from the soccer game was messing with Tony during first period math class when he was trying to work and he was shooting paper planes with notes saying something like dude nobody likes you and another one said: you are a nerd that doesn’t wear glasses so back off from are school then Tony got very very furious but he kept his cool then Tony walked to art class it was about a minute before ten when this same kid tried to mock tony’s intelligence trying to get to two hundred by six but he couldn’t because he got all the numbers wrong and Tony just walked away and ignored him he was counting to two hundred by six to himself while walking to math class because he knew that his assignment was to count up to the biggest number by whatever number he could count by. Counting to two hundred by six that was nearly impossible.

So he walked in the teacher said Tony was first. So he counted the numbers by six all the way to one hundred two and after the bell rang that’s when that same kid came back again and tried to mock his intelligents again by sarcastically saying what’s two times thirty four said Tony then walked away then the kid ran in front of him and said “count by fives and get to one hundred” said that same kid. Tony did it in less in 10 seconds then he walked away then Tony and his class was walking to lunch a minute later then this same kid cut in front of Tony in line so that’s when Tony just ignored him again trying to hold in his anger but the kid put a sign on his shirt that said Kick me then the teacher caught the kid and sent him to Detention table then Tony calmed down and went to his table with his class with his lunch box then after he took off the note the teacher said “Tony why didn’t you say anything i won’t know if somebody is bullying you” but Tony was eating his lunch while listening then his teacher said we will have a talk after school before you go home so Tony was talking to Julian “hey Julian who is that kid?!” asked Tony “his name is Eddy” answered “Eddy what?!” asked Tony again “Ayden Eddy Ayden” said “what!” said Tony pretending to yell but Julian said “just kidding” his name is actually Adam Jackson” answered Julian.

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