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The Hand of God

"We don't normally leave a review until a tale is finished, because it's not really fair to comment on plot until one gets to the end of it. However, this story intrigued us. There is mystery, suspense, and most interestingly, the effect on the community when two priests are at odds with each other. Huge potential here for one of those drama filled films, with no one really knowing what happened until the end of the film. The characters are impactful, without being overly dramatic, each settled into a self=security of fully knowing who and what they are, warts and all.. We thoroughly enjoyed it, and look forward to seeing it completed. No teenage angst here, this is a story for grown ups, with real characters and frightening motivations."

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The Hand Of God

"I'm really sorry for Sister Mary & Father Michael. I only have disgust for Father Patrick as he was beneath Scum !! I'm liking this story and wondering about the outcome. "

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