A Sweet Read

"I did enjoy this story very much. I like the MC and her best friend. I would have loved it if you expanded it a little more so the encounters you mentioned the two MCs had you actually could read about. It's something worth considering. You have all the bones here to make a great novel. In showing and not telling the story you would allow your readers to become more invested in their relationship. Still, you managed to convey the feeling of wanting they both had for one another and the ending was sweet. Honestly, it left me wanting to know more. What is this connection they had, Is it simply love at first sight or is there something more? Why are they so connected? What is the explanation?"