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Strong suspense and characters

"This story was very engaging and it fit right into the Star Wars galaxy. The plot was suspenseful - I found myself wanting to read more with each chapter. The characters were well rounded and interesting and there were many great details about military strategy and the effects of battle. I would definitely want to read more by this author. Well done!"

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Excellent fanfiction

"I am only on chapter three and I love this fanfiction. I added it to my reading list so I can finish it at a later time. This reminds me of both Star Wars and Star Trek. I am not sure if that is intended, but it is what I see in this story thus far."

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