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Hades

"Really enjoyed "

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Hades

"Really enjoyed this story, loved the writers style. Looking forward to reading more "

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Hades {Book 1}

"That was awesome I loved it "

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Good

"It's good, I read through all the chapters today and I couldn't get enough. It would help if you would make them longer because I always wanted more. But other than that your grammar and everything was good. I felt like the plot of the story could be brought up more, but I could still understand what was going on and everything. Yeah, keep up the good work, I would love to see more."

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Such clean fun

"So nice to read a book with a vastly different approach to the plot than normal. Kiddos. I love the read, I love the LACK of language and Smut. It was refreshing! Kept you guessing all the way thru!!! "

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Could Not Continue.

"You're a great writer, that I can tell by the first couple chapters. However, I just could not get past the fourth chapter without feeling some type of way. I'm sure the plot was coming up soon but for the first few chapters I read I could not get over the fact that this all felt like some child predator bs. I'm sure you tried your best to go along with the mythology of it all but this was just not for me I guess. Your writing style is very good though, I would like to see a different genre from you aside from fiction."

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*Shakes my head*

"You can't change Mythology, after all some people actually believe in the Greek gods. they are called Hellenic polytheists. if one of them read the book they would be mortified. Persephone was/is the daughter of ZEUS god of the sky and Demeter goddess of agriculture, therefore Persephone is the goddess of spring. No where in mythology does it state that her father was a werewolf. She is a GODDESS and that is that. In all versions of her story she is described as a WOMAN not a child. There are two accounts of the story but in neither was Demeter happy that her daughter had been taken. I'd read them and rethink the story if i were you. https://www.greekmyths-greekmythology.com/myth-of-hades-and-persephone/"

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