【I Promise You, Naruto】 by Rosemary King at Inkitt
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【I promise you, Naruto】

Summary

ᴡʜᴀᴛ ɪғ ᴍᴀᴅᴀʀᴀ ᴡᴀsɴ'ᴛ ᴛʜᴇ sᴛʀᴏɴɢᴇsᴛ ɴɪɴᴊᴀ, ᴡʜᴀᴛ ɪғ ɴᴀʀᴜᴛᴏ ʜᴀᴅ ᴀ ғʀɪᴇɴᴅ ᴀɴᴅ sᴏᴍᴇᴏɴᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴘʀᴏᴛᴇᴄᴛ ʜɪᴍ, ᴡʜᴀᴛ ɪғ ᴏɴᴇ ɢɪʀʟ ᴅɪᴅɴ'ᴛ ʟᴏᴠᴇ sᴀsᴜᴋᴇ, ᴡʜᴀᴛ ɪғ sʜɪᴋᴀᴍᴀʀᴜ ᴀɴᴅ ᴄʜᴏᴊɪ's ғᴀᴛʜᴇʀs ᴅɪᴅɴ'ᴛ ᴅɪᴇ, ᴡʜᴀᴛ ɪғ......

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0
Age Rating
13+

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Twelve years ago, a nine tailed fox appeared. It's tail lashed out, smashing mountains and creating tidal waves crashing to the shores. A band of ninja rose to defend their village from the attack.

"Hold the attack! We have to wait until the Fourth Hokage gets here!" A ninja shouted.

"It's getting closer! We can't let it get close to our village!" Another shouted.

One great ninja was able to imprison the monster and seal it in a body, but died in the process. He was known as the Yellow Flash, Minato Namikaze.



"AHAHAHAHAHA"

"Narutooo! Get back here! When I get my hands on you!"

"Why would you do such a thing!"

Naruto ran with a bucket swinging in his hand. They jumped from building to building trying to chase after him.

"AHAHA, just give up, you're just so bent because you don't have the guts to do what I just did!" Naruto continued running.

"Losers, Wannabes! You'll never catch me!"

Ninja ran down the halls to the hokage's office, bursting through the door.

"Lord hokage! It's an emergency!"

"I hope your not bothering me for some trivia, and don't say it's Naruto again" Sarutobi said.

"It is Naruto, He climbed onto the hokage faces!"

"And he vandalized and graffitied all over them!"

Sarutobi sighs.

Naruto and the ninja run back and forth on top of the buildings. "Naruto! Hold on!"

Naruto camouflages with the fence. When the ninja run by he comes out of hiding.

"Ahaha, that's was too easy"

"Oh yea Naruto!" Iruka screams in Naruto's ear.

"AHHHH!" Naruto jumps in the air screaming, before falling on the ground.

"Where'd you come from Iruka-Sensei, what are you doing here" Naruto asks.

"No! What are you doing here, you're suppose to be in class!"

"I've got him Iruka-Sensei" a feminine voice said.

"[Name]?" Naruto asked confused.

[Name] smacks Naruto on the back of his head, "Owww, what was that for Sawa" he whines in pain.

"Naruto, you need to stop getting into trouble, something bad could happen to you, and if it does I'll be sad, and then I'd have to kill someone, so please, for my sake be good"

Naruto looks up into [Name's] dull [Color] eyes. [Name] was Naruto's friend, they've been together since they started in the academy. He always wondered why she was friends with him, who'd ever wanna be friends with someone everyone avoids.

[Name] grabs Naruto's hand helping him off the ground. "T-thanks" The yellow haired boy said blushing.

"No problem"



"I'm at the end of my rope here Naruto, you failed the graduation test last time, and the time before that, tomorrow you've got another chance, and your messing up again"

"Hm" Naruto scoffs.

"Fine! because you missed it Naruto, everyone will review the transformation jutsu" Iruka says annoyed.

"Awwwww" Everyone but Naruto and [Name] whined.

"If you have a problem with that then come talk to me" [Name] said with a dark glare.

They all shiver in fear.

"N-no there's no p-problem at all" Sakura said.

"What a drag"



"Alright, Sakura Haruno, let's do it!"

Sakura transforms into Iruka-Sensei.

"Transformed into me, good" Iruka compliments her.

"Yes! I did it!"

'Chaaaa! I kicked butt' Sakura thought.

"Sasuke did you see that?"

"Next, Sasuke Uchiha"

Sasuke also transforms into Iruka-Sensei.

"Uhhh, good" Iruka said a little creeped out.

"Next, Naruto Uzumaki"

"This is a total waste of time Naruto" Shikamaru says.

"We always pay for your screw ups" Ino complained.

"Like I care"

They shiver as [Name] sends them an Icy glare, "You'll do just fine Naruto" [Name] says.

Naruto walks up to the front of the room.

'Naruto do your best' Hinata thought.

"Transform!"

Chakra surrounds Naruto's body, he transforms into a naked older female version of himself.

Iruka's nose bleeds, sending him flying to the ground.

"Ahaha! Gotcha! That's my sexy jutsu!" Naruto laughs.

"Cut the stupid tricks! This is your last warning!!" Iruka shouts.

[Name] sighs. Naruto always pulled pranks on people because all he wants is to be acknowledged by everyone.

'I swear I'm gonna kill everyone in this village if they don't stop treating him this way' [Name] thought with a dark aura around her.


"Naruto, why would you do that to the hokage faces, I mean you know who the hokage are, don't you?" Iruka asks curiously.

"Of course I do"

He sips up the rest of his miso ramen, "Everyone does, they were the best of their time right, the best of the best, undefeated ninja champs, and the fourth hokage is the one who saved the village from the nine tailed fox, he was the most amazing" Naruto said.

"Then why did you-"

"Because, I'm gonna be greater than any of them, me, Naruto Uzumaki, the next hokage, a ninja legend, then everyone will have to stop disrespecting me, and look up to me, believe it!"

"Uhhhh, by the way, I kinda wanna ask a favor, sensei"

"You want another bowl?"

"Nuh uh, I kinda wanna try on your headband, come on please" Naruto pleads.

"Oh this? No way, you can only wear the leafs headband when you finally graduate the academy and become a ninja, you've gotta pass the test tomorrow"

"That is so uncool!"

"Heheh, is that why you took off your goggles?"

"Humph! I want another bowl!"

[Name] smiles listening to Naruto and Iruka's chat, she'll protect Naruto no matter what happens, even when he becomes hokage.

'That's because I-'



"We will now start the final exam, when your name is called proceed to the testing room, the final exam will be on the clone jutsu" Iruka explains.

'Oh no, that's my worse technique! Great! I'm never gonna pass!' Naruto thought.

"Naruto Uzumaki"

'Alright Naruto, get it together, you can do this, believe it'

Naruto does the handsigns, building up chakra around him, "Clone jutsu!" The clone on the ground looked pitiful.

"You fail!"

"Iruka-Sensei, his moves were off but he's not bad, he did hang in there and replicate, this is his third try so you know he really wants to become a ninja, we could cut him a break, and pass him" Mizuki suggests.

Naruto lights up at the idea, "Alright!!"

"Mizuki-Sensei, All the others created at least three clones, and he's only created one, and look at it, it's pitiful, I can't give him a passing mark"

Naruto sighed. He knew it was too good to be true.



Naruto sits in the swing listening to all of the other kids parents compliment them, two girls were gossiping about Naruto making him feel even worse.

"There look, it's that boy, I heard he's the only one that didn't pass"

"Well it serves him right"

"Just imagine what would happen if he became a ninja, I mean he's the boy who-"

"If you say another word, I'll kill you" [Name] said giving the two an Icy look, she had her katana in her hand ready to attack.

They screamed in fear, and ran away. [Name] looks at Naruto, sadly he didn't pass. He trained so hard, and this is how far he gets.

"[Name], did you pass?" Kiba asked.

"Yes, but I won't be joining you guys, wherever Naruto goes I go" She answered bluntly.

"How come? I mean you passed, just because Naruto fails doesn't mean you have to retake the class with him"

"Yes it does" [Name] walks away, leaving Kiba shocked.

'You wouldn't understand Kiba, because all you care about is yourself' [Name] thought.

'All she cares about is Naruto, she doesn't care if anyone else loves her, what's so special about him!' Kiba thought heartbroken. 'This isn't over yet, I'll win her heart, just you watch, you yellow haired idiot'

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