Customize readability
Aa

Single-Ship Mission (Star Wars Fan Fiction)

Summary

The Empire has fallen, but is far from being defeated. Entire systems have yet to be pacified by the young Army of The New Republic. Undermanned, under-shipped, the brave soldiers of freedom, comprising both battle-proven Rebels and new recruits, are engaged in deadly fighting against localised but entrenched strongholds of imperial military power. The newly setup Republican Intelligence Agencies, both civilian (RIS) and military (MIC), are playing an increasing role in coordinating efforts to root out the remnants of Palpatine's rule over territories, resources and minds across the galaxy.

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

A Boring Assignment

Space over Planet Inesmor - Buldai System, Saturday, 18:00

Why am I always getting sent on crappy missions lately?

Major Irsat Hanulf looked at his craft’s head-high display. He could barely make out some of the readings projected in pale green light on the windscreen. The space-proof glass was covered in superficial cracks, testimony to the use of the one-man ship in countless combat missions.

If only I had a hyperdrive that worked, I could get this stupid mission over with and head straight back to base. But no, I’m going to have to sit and wait for a transport for Ashla knows how long.

His droid sent him an on-screen message: “Major, we’ll be entering the atmosphere of Inesmor in three minutes.”

“I know, I know. Activate the front shield and put the weapon systems online just in case.”

The ship started its descent to the planet. Pretty soon the friction noise and the rise in temperature let the pilot know he was leaving outer space and entering atmosphere. Heavy turbulence shook the metallic structure of the ship, which was nothing uncommon.

But suddenly Hanulf felt a steep drop in cabin pressure. Air was rapidly getting scarce. He put on his breathing mask, fastened it tightly, and engaged the oxygen flow. Catching his breath he comlinked to the astrodroid.

“RB15, cockpit pressurisation is down, any other dysfunctions?”

No answer appeared on the droidcom display. And in the pilot’s headphones there was complete silence, not even the usual static.

“RB, do you copy? What the hell is going on?”

More silence.

The Major grabbed the joystick and started navigating the heavily rocked ship through the thick lower atmosphere. From the corner of his eye the pilot saw what looked like lightning coming right at him from a source he couldn’t make out. A second later the ship was jolted and sparks shot out from the cockpit scopes, a smell of burnt metal and plastic assaulting the pilot through his mask. The remaining on-board electronics were fried.

Hanulf searched with his feet for the auxiliary pedals activating the flaps and tried to work them. They responded with intense squeaking.

He had just steered the craft through the last layer of the atmosphere, when another shock sent the Starfighter into a spiral: a turbolaser blast had just taken away the left wing. He fumbled for the firing handles of the ejector seat hanging down above his head, hoping the egress mechanism was still in working order.

One pull on the loop and the canopy detached from the craft, exposing him to the savage assault of air. Only for the seat harness he would have been blown away instantly.

On the second pull nothing seemed to happen. Hanulf, struggling against the insane strength of the airflow, tried again. This time he felt a violent jolt and within seconds intense acceleration was squashing his whole upper body into his lower back as the seat zoomed up like a bullet, propelled by the powerful ejector engines.

Then his chute opened up, the engines automatically shut off and he started gliding over the jagged relief of the blue-green planet. But he wasn’t the only flying object in the sky of Inesmor.

An imperial TIE bomber flanked by what looked like two x-wings, was on rapid approach at two o’clock. This mission, he thought, might not qualify as boring after all.

Let F.T. O'Brien know what you thought about this chapter!
Love this

3

Love this

Funny

0

Funny

Spicy

0

Spicy

Suspenseful

0

Suspenseful

Emotional

0

Emotional

Profound

0

Profound

Heartwarming

0

Heartwarming

Shocking

0

Shocking

Good Writing

1

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

0

Compelling Plot

Great Character

0

Great Character

Strong Dialog

0

Strong Dialog

Further Recommendations

Flucht

Amy: Super schön geschrieben... Ich habe es wie eigentlich alle Bücher der Autorin, liebe Maike, durchgesuchtet... Ich konnte es nicht aus der Hand legen. Fantastisch geschrieben mit so viel Gefühl einfach unwiderstehlich 👍💪❤️‍🔥💞💗💖🫦🌶️🔥🫶

Read Now
Therapiestunden in der Galaxie

Maria: Tolle Geschichte , gefällt mir sehr gut , bitte lass Darius 🐕bis zum Ende der Geschichte existieren. Bin ein Tierfreund 🥰

Read Now
Rejected by the Gamma Loved by the Alpha

Suiihera: OMG, I just finished reading your story, and I really enjoyed it! The world you've created is fascinating. As I was reading, I could easily picture the characters, emotions, and key moments unfolding visually.Have you ever considered adapting it into a visual storytelling format such as a comic, man...

Read Now
Cabin Fever

TMarc: i love how a lone man fell in love with an orphaned woman . i love the story !

Read Now
Rencontre inattendue

user-hudnsWlwGg: Een zeer mooi verhaal vol liefde, vriendschap, opofferingen verhaal uit dewelke de talenten van de schrijver zeer mooi naar boven komen.

Read Now
Yours Darlin'

ShadowStoryteller: I love everything about this story!!! Wow! ❤️🫠

Read Now
Where the Tide Finds You (Book #1 in Saltwater Creek Series)

Lillipad0234: 💕 I really enjoyed this sweet, heartfelt story about two people helping each other heal through love. Flo and Christian were wonderful characters, and I found myself rooting for them from beginning to end.There were a few minor grammar mistakes, but they didn't take away from the enjoyment of the s...

Read Now
Thornhaven

PandaMonium: Absolutely loved this book. Best book I've read, not just enjoyed! Wasn't a slow burn that can get boring, Wasn't too fast and didn't give readers a chance. It's just that perfect tempo. I thought towards the ending, that there would be a bit of retaliation, but at the same time, it didn't bother m...

Read Now
Another Half

Heika van Walderveen: I had to get used to the style. It’s a lot of switching and getting back into the story of the characters. Also the different timelines were a bit confusing in the beginning. But once you’re used to it, it’s really quite original. The plot is good, but it’s only book 1 (out of 3), but so far so good...

Read Now