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What is your opinion?
The neglection
"A really sweet little story, that tugs at your heartstrings. The writer could make a bit more of the plot in showing the struggle of Max's time on the street, but all in all, a good tale, with a little twist in the middle."
Review
"I have only read two chapter's but I can already see a clear and intriguing plott line. You have added detail so I can get a grasp at the characters personalities, Great job."
The neglection
"I really like the book so far. My favorite part of the book so far is that he doesn't realize that it's Max. I hope his mom will let him keep him. I can't wait to read the rest. Very nice writing "
