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Who spat in your pizza alpha dude

"Great read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Good

"Good book and will read agin"

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Idk

"Story is very good, but sometimes a little confusing. Some words used are incorrect for the sentence."

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awesome

"it's so awesome and amazing keep it up it just keeps getting better and better I love it"

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Amazing

"Can't wait for next chapters this book is amazing"

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Needs A Lot Of Help

"I know how hard it is to write and stay focused...however, it seems like this author can't stay on a topic long enough to complete it and the attempts at humor are horrible. The inner monologs is annoying and not funny, nor does it add to the story. The grammatical errors, spelling errors, and complete use of the wrong words in areas are painful. This author needs an editor- a real editor to give thoughts, opinions, and help guide them where they want to go. "

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