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Very impressed! Like it was written by J.K. herself!

"I started with your other story first and enjoyed it. A great vision of the months after the battle. But having read this, I was transported back to the time I read the original stories. You've captured the characters perfectly and told the story we all wanted to know in a believable way. I'm interested to see what you can do with your own world and characters, but thank you for giving an additional ending to the characters we all grew up with and loved."

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Brilliant!

"I just love the way this story was written! I was instantly transported back to Hogwarts. I felt it could have easily passed for J K Rowlings own work, it was that good! It was truly magical."

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Writer hits the spot

"Excellent book. Thank you to the author for providing this for true Harry Potter fans out in the world. Read this if you have had a whole in your heart ever since Rowling ended Harry Ron and hermiones' adventures a decade ago. "

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The story you didn't know you wanted but got anyway

"Ginny Luna and Neville being the front of the resistance in Hogwarts was something that I'm sure a lot of fans wanted to see. Harry, Ron and Hermione camping in the woods for a year was an interesting change of pace, but book 7 was just missing a certain degree of liveliness that the other 6 had to some degree. Also, we needed a full look into how Neville, the kid who was Malfoy, Crabbe and Goyle's favourite chew toy, turned into Harry 2.0. This is the book 7, B Side we all wanted, whether we knew it or not."

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Missing scenes filled

"I don't know where to begin. Over the last few days I've immersed myself in this story never wanting to let it go. It followed book canon which made it feel like a JKR installment. It had wonderful detail from Pottermore that enhanced the story beyond the books, yet was still canon. I was "THERE"! The author took us inside the heads of characters we all know through a series of scenes, some from DH, others imagined but completely believable. It's bothersome to me that 'proper' writing within a given chapter is supposed to be from a single POV when I want to know what everyone in the place is thinking! This author did that wandering through multiple character's heads seamlessly. Never once did I find the author's imagining of what was going on to be out of character, or unbelievable. He/she knows these characters inside and out. I highly recommend this story as a missing link to what was going on at Hogwarts during that final year while Harry was off on his own separate adventure. The only thing that would have made the story better was a little more of Snape's thoughts as he was trying to keep the students safe while still having to appear to be a loyal Death Eater. I would have liked to see his frustration at the rebellion of Neville, Ginny and the others. It was gratifying to be able to get into McGonagall's head during the final duel when Harry was revealing the truth about Snape. I've not read a HP fanfiction in a long, long, long time that was as well written as this one. I highly recommend it."

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This is the HP story you were looking for.

"And even if you didn't know you were looking for it, read it anyway. Absolutely fantastic job. (Admittedly, I cried.) (But hey, that's how you know it's good.) Only saw one typo but other than that. Just. Wow. Thanks for bringing me back to the world of Harry Potter, even if it was absolutely heart-rending to have to go through that battle again. Amazing."

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Exactly what I wanted to see

"The biggest problem with the Harry Potter series is that it's all from his point of view. So we never really get to see or understand events from other peoples perspective. I think that they would be more than a few people that want to know what happened at Hogwarts during that last year. As far as I'm concerned, this story covers it rather nicely. Well written and well planned, this is one of the best Harry Potter fanfiction stories I've seen. Thank you."

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