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I LOVE IT!!!

"Thank you for the wonderful story Sending kisses 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘"

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Hold Me Tight (Completed)

"I'm so happy that Zen & Kai and Dean & Keit stayed together are are endgame for each other. They deserve nothing but happiness. I'm even happy for Theo and Archie. Love is blind and it just goes by your heart not your "equipment" "

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Honey, Hold Me Tight

"Loved it sooo much!!! Lots of drama, but very well written and shows how amazing strong love can overcome anything!! The steamy scenes are amazing and made hotter due to what the couples went through. Highly recommend!! 🥰❤️🥰❤️🌶️🌶️😍"

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Lovely stories

"Enjoyed reading this book. 🥰 Every story is special in its own way. 😍 The care,affection, pain,friendship and Loving one another is explained so beautifully. Loved your book. Keep up the good work. 😊👍🐰"

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The emotions were raw and so real❤️

"I love this book soooo much. The emotions,domination,the possessiveness and all☺️ please drop another boyxboy like this one🙏🏽 we want more❤️❤️"

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Amazing!

"I'm not going to lie, at first I was a little intimidated by the length. I wasn't sure after the first chapter that I would enjoy these characters enough to finish. By the end I was upset the story wasn't longer. You made me feel so many emotions. I found myself laughing, crying, and yelling. I was happy one minute and pissed the next. I learned the most heroic actions as well as the most shameful of these men. You made their lives come to life with your words. I felt I knew them all personally and had an emotional stake in the outcome of individual stories. I look forward to seeing what you write next. Thank you for the journey."

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👏🏻

"Loved it!!"

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So what if we love each other

"Amazing!! This the right word for it . I cried during a lot without any consent that I started crying. It's lovely story and I am enjoying it so far"

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Honey, Hold Me Tight

"I'm pretty sure I spent 99% of the time AJ was writing this hating on Zen and Dean, Dean considerably less though. Ayushi has a way of messing with your feelings, making you wish you could pull them from your device and smack a bish. This book is full of characters you love to hate and characters you want to love and protect. There is so much drama and insanity, a ton of face palming and for me shipping people that will never get together (that still makes me sad but I'll get over it). Everyone should read it. Oh Also she's a tease. Get's yah thinking they are gonna hook up but they don't. One time it was funny though. "

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Great Book

"I thought this story had a really great and interesting plot, I loved it♥️ and would definitely recommend it!👍"

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Honey hole me tight

"I'm sorry straight up died. It was wonderful and I cried but it was so beautiful.❤❤❤"

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Honey, hold me tight

"I loved the drama in the story I loved that Weston and Stephanie finally got what they deserved overall this was a super good story and the author is an amazing writer I hope they write more stories that I can read cuz I love the story so much"

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I love and adore this book .

"Cried my eyes out . Love love love the different points of view , the different love stories . "

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Lovely❤️

"The feels...the emotions... It’s as if I’m in the story watching every event with my own eyes and feeling every emotion myself. Kudos to the writing style and expressions of the writer. 🙏 This is a lovely master piece. And I would really love this book made into a drama. God that will be really good I’m sure.✌🏿✌🏿 Keep up the good work writer!!!! Love you work🖤"

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Very emotional.

"I love this story. I am simply amazed by the two way representations of the couples here. The struggle of dealing with their sexual orientation is well shown while keeping it realistic. It's good that Dean and Keit's life doesn't only revolve around their relationship. Their uni life and friend circle is equally important. And the surprise that we get in further chapters. I'll not give a spoiler but that surprise is the best part of the book."

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Great Book

"Seriously this book really prove "slow and steady wins the Race" .. Truthfully I read this book from day first but didn't pay much attention but now as story move further things are getting interesting and I look forward for more updates... Good work .. second am also fan of BLs...so All the Best Ayushi ... Waiting for more updates...❤️❤️"

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What the

"What did she dare him to do kiss the guy cuz I already hate her this is making me dislike her even more uuuuugggggghhhh"

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Honey

"Well told interesting. Wonderfully written "

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Amazing

"God you have no idea how much I am loving this story. Just one request, please do not stop this story in between. Take your time and complete this story. Thankyou and God bless❤️"

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Check the tenses

"The story could be made more enjoyable if you work on the tenses. Present simple suddenly becomes past simple, and sometimes within the same sentence. Keep up the good work!"

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