Valley of the dark roses
I enjoyed the story so far, especially the strong female alpha and the mystery about the cure. However, punctuation needs a lot of work, and you also appear to be using wrong verbs at times. For example, turnt is used, to my knowledge, to signify excitement, so maybe, in that instant, you should use turned? But this is only one example. I also noticed that when a dialogue ends, you put both a fullstop and a comma like this : "blah blah.", blah.
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That's not the case. The correct form is to simply use the comma: "blah blah," blah blah. Or the fullstop if the sentence ends there: "blah blah."
Otherwise, the plot was rather interesting, hence the 4 stars. Maybe an online editor like grammarly could help with the punctuation.
Keep up the hard work!