What is your opinion?
Crimson Shadow
"I love the story, the characters introduced so far are great! I love Mireya’s attitude. I recommend this story to readers who like vampire stories and to all humans so they can be aware of what type of beings live amongst them. I can’t wait to read more!"
Two thumbs up
"I already love the main character and can’t wait to read more on what will come next! I’d recommend this story to anyone who likes vampire stories or to those who already enjoy this talented author’s other books. "
Exiting
"This sounds very promising! I can’t wait to see where this goes!"
Good Idea!
"Hey! I love the story concept and where you want to take it to the future. That is great! However, I would love for you to go back to the beginning to make it more impactful so the reader can be like...OMG...what's going to happen next. For example, when the asteroid hit in the first chapter, I felt that was a little rushed and I didn't get the details of what it looked like and how this impacted the characters emotionally/mentally. I wanted more details there, so I can feel for them. You know what I mean? So here are some things to think about as you continue writing...What emotions do I want to pull from my readers? How is this impactful? How is life going to be different now? I hope this helps! I can't wait to see how this develops in a masterpiece! Happy Writing!"
Crimson Shadow
"Ready to read the whole thing. A very mature look and style for such a young person. I can't wait to read the whole book."
