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"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on instagram: eloi.se78319 "

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Three's Company

"I really enjoyed this book! It is so easy to get through, and I loved the little love stories. Especially Felix' and Jessica's! The only thing I would note to the author is that the third part was not as good to read. Many conversations were copied from either part 1 or 2, which bored me pretty quickly, and I'd rather have some new information. But like I said, the story flows beautifully, and I really enjoyed this read. I can definitely recommend! "

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wowza

"this book is so amazing. i absolutely love how you are able to portray the characters so wel in such a short amount of time. this is very unique. please write more!!!"

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three's company

"Wow, this first chapter was very well done. You pulled me in with your rich descriptions and the flow was eloquent and surreal."

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