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Virgie's Take

"Everything is a mystery throughout most of this book. So many questions...what did Leon do to deserve rejection of his pack? Why did Ashley's father deny her development?"

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Great book!

"I like how you leave me wanting more. "

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Twilight Rouge

"Lovely story ❤️ "

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Interesting

"Moving to book 2 😁"

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Love the book

"Loved the book"

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Nice

"The characters were lovable and believable. If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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Talented

"The writer is so talented. You can publish you work on NovelStar App and earn big time."

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Love it!

"This is my new addictive series to read. I love the plot, character development, and use of detail. I like how you had both characters take it slow with their relationship by having them start out as friends before becoming mates. I also like how you made Ashley show that even though her father treated her like garbage, she still has unconditional love for him, Stocholm Syndrome or not. She recognized how toxic and abusive he was, but still had a slim bit of love for him and is even willing to talk about it with him when he's ready, I respect that. I also like how she heard Leon out even when he was tell her and her father about why his pack kicked him out instead of jumping to conclusion like everyone else. Grammar is a small issue, but other than that, excellent job and I intend on reading the rest of the series and writing a review for each one!"

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Love it

"Great book. And great story line. I love the characters and how the events have unfolded so far. Can’t wait for more. Great work. Recommended to my sister and cousjn. "

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Ash

"Recommend to everyone "

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Review

"I liked this story. But was cut short. Anyway I'll read their next journey 😂😂"

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Twilight Rogue 1/5

"Love it!! On to the next ❤️"

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Good content

"I love it although the plot is hard to decipher"

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Twilight Rouge

"Well this is a great start to the series. I’m glad she finally walked away from her prison her father had her in. But he needs to rethink his stature. He didn’t deserve to be kicked out of his pack. On to the next book."

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Great

"Love the story. Hate the father, hope he comes to his senses soon or gets knocked out lol"

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Cute

"Very cute story!! "

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Twilight rouge

"Love it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Very good read

"This book is captivating from the beginning. There are few homonyms that are mixed up, but the meaning is still there. I would recommend this book to friends because it's a quick read and it's interesting. "

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Twilight rogue

"I really am loving this storey,nothing better than young love and there problems bringing them together"

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Twilight Rougue

"This was a great love story. Poor Ashley so pain from her father... Great job. Can't wait to read the next book"

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