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Great suspence

"This story is full of suspence and thrill. Not to forget the spice. Every chapter will leave you wanting more. Curiosity will not leave you either. Amazing book. Love this.❤️"

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👏🏻🌶️⚡️🔥🥰

"Loved this story!!🥰. Can’t wait for stories about the other characters. Please do a closer proofreading for typos and pronoun agreement. "

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Lovely story

"Thank you for this amazing story. Characters, exquisite. Character development, terrific. Sex scenes, fabulous and oh so hot. The mafia family was really ethical and good in this story. Their love story from beginning, through half truths till end was really well described and relatable. Really lovable story, truly. Thank you ❤️❤️❤️ highly recommend to everybody. 😉 Only weak points are the often mixed up personal pronouns. But still enjoyable 🤩"

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love this book

"highly recomded "

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Die hard desire

"I really don't know what to say! This is probably the best story I have ever read! Please keep them coming! If you could please write a alpha wolf story! ❤️❤️❤️ rejection and abuse! "

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Amazing

"It was wonderful. The plot was so good . And no confusion anywhere , it was clean and amazing ❤️❤️❤️🩵"

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The heart wants what the heart wants

"Really enjoyed this book, characters are not too many. Story line progression also fairly quick, I cannot put it down. 👏🏽loved reading so far. "

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Awsome book

"Love every bit of it. Want to read more from you. You are gifted"

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Diehard Desire

"What a brilliant story. Gripping, suspenseful, funny and intriguing. I just couldn't put it down. You are an amazing writer. Cannot wait to read the other stories, especially Iris'. I loved her character. Keep up the good work."

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Diehard desire

"Excellent story. Strongly recommend it.."

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Diehard Desire

"I was enthralled! I, normally, don’t read mafia-type stories; but, this was different. A journey of love despite the challenges. There was humor, betrayal, love (in all forms). Beautifully written. Bravo!"

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Loved it!

"Wonderful story, thank you so much! "

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Diehard Desire

"Really enjoyed this story except for the many spelling, grammar and punctuation errors. Look forward to reading more of your work!"

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Diehard Desire

"The story was great! I loved it! You have a winner here! Keep writing! Get an Editor PLEASE… When you love to read and get immersed in a book. It is very distracting to figure out where your going with the story when technical errors, spelling, and grammar are present. Lastly, I love that you like to communicate with your audience - but “minions.” Even though I’m sure you mean this term affectionately - not all of us interpret that term as such. Looking forward to reading more of your work and seeing your unique perspective in writing. Please keep your uniqueness to writing and personal perspectives (aka “minions”) in check when addressing your fans! We are your FANS! Or would not spend our time writing to you. Much success in all your future endeavors! Laura "

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Diehard Desire

"Be very proud. Your detail and characters were fabulous. I read until my eyes hurt and then continued the next day. Thank you for sharing your gift!"

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Nice one

"I like story only issue is it's too long but worth it. Go for it. Good work dear keep it up. Good luck. "

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Diehard desire

"This is a wonderful book. Keep you on the edge of your set. Makes you laugh and cry. The writer if very good thank you so much for this book. "

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Amazing work.😁

" To describe the story in one word - FANTASIC "

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Absolutely loved it

" Great thriller and mystery Beautiful love story Great twist Incredibly well written ❤️"

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Quite a rollercoaster ride of emotions!

"Okay constructive criticism first: Although the story was not a great thriller but still it managed to spike your curiosity in some parts.I would rather put this story under the romance category. Now time for appreciation shoutout:I just love the writing style of this author...she kept a good balance of drama,erotica,romance,humour throughout the story which kept me hooked onto it till the end...and by the end she beautifully portrayed the real sides of a marriage and married life in general rather than just vaguely stating they had a happy ever after...that added onto the story and just made it a genuine piece of work!"

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