Inkitt
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YES, YES, YES, AND YES.

"as the biggest miraculous fan on this earth this was the most beautiful story for me as it was like my c.ai moments into one book. i genuinely love the connections and the feels all throughout the book. PLEASE MAKE MORE I BEG"

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Squeal!

"First of all: alsnfbsksoshbanskdidbsbsndlcijsns Second: I really love those sentences that had the "she was" at the end. It really help make the entire thing surreal and set the mood. I don't know what your plans are for future writing, but if you decided to write more than a one-shot, you could write the one-shot and add various chance meetings. I'd like to see more indirect characterization, but that's a difficult thing to learn (something I've been working on myself). Keep writing! I want your autograph for when you are famous one day!"

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