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Kidnapping and rescue

"Reasons to like: The characters seemed to be real. The plot had a number of twists and turns that kept the final scene well concealed. Police procedures were all researched. The was almost no gratuitous violence. Things to improve: Grammar and spelling. Choice of words. More plot complexity. "

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Great book..i like it

"I liked everything in the book. I would recommend to my friends. I simply like it."

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Diamond Rose

"A very interesting story indeed! I like the way the story end. Despite of all the odds that Di encountered happiness found her at the end."

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Rose

"Great book! Well done writer."

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Diamond Rose

"Second story I've read today by this author! Beautifully written sensual romance, with characters you come to care about."

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Diamond Rose

"This was a refreshing change from my normal read! I was impressed by her introduction of characters, very enlightening, but not drawn out! This was a fascinating love story with a twist! I enjoyed reading it!"

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This story is so sweet.

"I love this story so much "

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Diamond Rose

"This story was such a gem. I loved the entire plot, and it’s definitely something I’d read, again.💗"

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Good

"Good so far"

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A great story

"This is a story that pushes my comfort zone. It is a very creative story, and I enjoyed it very much, my own personal biases and judgment just nagged at me the whole time reading it. But it was creative, exciting and very hard to put down. "

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Diamond Rose

"This book was very sexy. Di and Jason (I think that's his name) are so cute together."

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It wa agood writin

"With such a grim subject,author was able to take out the positivities and love which was great to read."

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Awesome

"Impossible to put down. My chores have to wait!"

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Diamond rose

"I enjoyed this book a lot, I liked the plot of the story, the twists of events, the romance was absolutely amazing and the ending was perfect. For me the grammar was perfect. I didn't have to be correcting myself as I read. Thank you so much for this hope you write more in future. "

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Diamond Rose

"Very beautiful story, I love it even though we never got to know how old Diamond is... ❤️❤️ Structured writing and it helped create a vivid picture, I felt like I was there. Nice work! ❤️"

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Good!

"This has a strong plotline, excellent characters and a strong sense of right and wrong through it. The writing format was well laid out, and obviously carefully executed. Grammar and spelling were some of the best I've seen on this app to date. I think I found one or two errors in the entire thing, and they were so minor, I couldn't tell you where they were. They didn't distract me from the read. Nice to see good editing and a well thought out story. Please don't be offended by the lack of 5 stars. I rarely give them, as an average of 5 stars for a story is Lord of the Rings or The Narnia series. I am a literature snob. Well done, though. I would gladly read more of your work."

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