What is your opinion?
The Perfect Story
"The first three chapters are great, other than some minor grammar mistakes, KEEP ON WRITING!!! I am really lookoing forward to seeing how the plot all comes together! Great start! 😆😆😆"
The Halfway Perfect Town
"The books is off to a powerful start and I hope you continue and upload soon because this left me hanging. I can’t wait to read more of your works. Keep up the amazing work. "
The halfway perfect town
"WOW awesome story from a great writer, powerful intense story, looking forward for much more to come"
almost everything
"i rated this book 4 out of 5 because, well, ya didn't have everything. You had long sturdy paragraphs, lots of dialogue throughout and detail in between, and you stuck to one genre. But one thing you missed was describing what the characters look like on the outside of the dialogue. I could only imagine the setting of the scene. You have to mention if the character has a fit body, or are they plump are they wearing a scarf, things like that. But, overall, this is the best book I've ever read, just work on describing the characters more thoroughly."
The Halfway Perfect Town
"I've enjoyed the story so far. Your use of the narrator being a more popular girl is unique, especially with a lot of stories online being told differently. I can not wait to read more and see how the plot develops. There were some grammatical and punctuation errors especially concerning dialogue and missing punctuation, but that can be fixed with proofreading. Maybe add some more detail and also keep in mind with dialogue, use a new paragraph when the speaker changes otherwise it can get confusing. Also, just wondering but how is one girl able to drive her friends to school freshman year? I dont know if you mentioned it, but freshman where I live is 14 and kids can't get their license then. But I really enjoyed this story so far and can't wait to keep reading. You're a great writer from what I've read. Keep writing!"
My Review!
"It was a great read, and I would love to know more about these girls. The chapters had a good pace and the plot moved the story making me want to read more, keep up the great work."
The halfway perfect town
"Looks good so far. You have some grammar mistakes but not enough to lose me. Its interesting getting the point of view from the popular girls. I'm interested to see where you take these girls as you continue. Keep up the good work!"
The Halfway Perfect Town
"WOW! You are a really good writer, you definitely have talent and I think you have an amazing story! I'm so excited to keep reading! There are only a few things I could suggest to help you. Your punctuation is a little off, specifically your quotation marks and your lack of periods. I also think adding more details, like what her bedroom looks like or what kind of car her friend drives could make this a 5 star story! Overall you are really awesome and inspiring. Keep up the good work!!"
