What is your opinion?
Malfi raised
"More of this story please and see how it ends thanks love it so far "
Good
"I really like this story. Some of the grammar is wrong but other than that your writing skills are good. I've never read a book with such crazy events with Mafia, werewolves, witches and vampires. I look forward to reading the rest of this story "
Mafia raised
"Holly is a great up and coming author, mafia books are tricky to write and I am really impressed by the realism, I'm expecting great things from her future! A++"
Mafia Raise
"Once again Scarlett is a psycho but I will claim her she's a badass I want justice for all her friends and family "
Thrills
"I really liked the plot. U rarely get til ser å girl in this position and it's refreshing. Cant wait for more"
Mafia Raised
"I love the book so far but I do think it's important to give constructive criticism too! There are some grammatical mistakes. I think it'd help to use an editing app like "pro writing aid" it's really helpful and you can use it for free and if you click on the mistakes it'll explain what's wrong with them so you'll be able to avoid them when writing in the future. Keep up the good work! ❤️"
Mafia raised
"Great story. I enjoy reading it. I've been nervous to comment, cuz the author responds a bit aggressively when I mention grammar or incomplete sentences. She/he/they responded "what are you talking about" for example the sentence was "he shooter his load in her". "
