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You broke me

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Summary

Have you ever gone through a break-up that totally ripped you apart? Read this if you haven't and you will feel what it's like to love someone and have them break you.

Genre
Poetry
Author
emma_kintz
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Broken Hearted

You stole my heart and said goodbye

You told me you loved me but it was a lie

I fell in love and loved you so

I always wanted you to know

You smiled at me and gave me chills

You made my heart full of thrills

But then you left me full of dread

Making me wish I was dead

And now you’re gone and I can’t confide

With all the pain that’s left inside

I told you my fears, my dreams, and my wishes

I gave you my tears, my smile, and my kisses

When you walked away and left me broken hearted

The fear, the tears, the sadness started

My smile faded and went away

But you didn’t care you always had your way

I always thought we’d be forever

But turns out it was for never

You always treated me like crap

And now you’ve left me in the back

I’ve always known someone would leave me alone

But I never thought you’d be that one

Chapters
1. Broken Hearted
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