Chapter 1: The Girl Who Struggles With Self-Esteem
We moved our club to the country at the old motel. There was only one house on the street right behind the clubhouse. My president Wolf stated that it was a house filled with 12 kids ranging from 18 to one year of age.
Our club is the Cobra MC. We were sitting out back when I saw the car pull up and two males and one female got out. The boys said something to her and she gave them the finger as she walked into the house. An hour later we heard some male yelling “Get your ass back here Sammy.” Then a horse riding through the field with the girl on it her long hair flying behind her.
We watched as a dirt bike followed the girl. Fuck you, Jerry we heard her yell at him. He yelled at her to get back to the barn. We watched as she rode the horse toward the bar.
The guy she called Jerry got off the bike and walked over to the horse. He jerked her off her horse and then slapped her. That did not sit well with any of us. She hit the ground. We started to head across the field when one of the boys who came home with her rode a bike up to them and jerked the boy off her.
Get the fuck out of here Jerry before I kill you. Never put your hands on my sister again. I watched as her brother held her close to him watching as the other one left. He lifted her on the back of his bike and rode her back to the house.
That fucker is dead because I knew just who he was. Wait until school tomorrow. I also knew Sammy. She was the quiet girl in class and never caused trouble unless she was pushed. Mostly stayed to herself.
Hello, Revise before you post and add quotations when you write! Over all the chapter was short but enticing. Good job?
when you have dialogue you need to use quotations. like “Get in the car!” He said. otherwise we can’t tell who is talking and when
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