What is your opinion?
Dear Ex, I still love you.
"I find it very poetic, was touched by it. Well written!"
Raw and beautiful!
"This story has captured my heart right from the beginning. It's so poetic and melancholic. I agree that there are a few grammatical errors. But those are just external things that can be easily edited. But the raw emotions behind those words, the unseen tears, and unheard sighs - basically the very essence of this story is what that stole my heart. Excellent job! Keep it up. Just get some help from any good editor and your grammatical issues will be solved."
Dear Ex
"Hi. Can I share some constructed criticism? Well, here goes. The love letters are too long. I think you can cut it in half. If you're thinking that chapters have to stretch, it doesn't. I have a chapter with two characters on the phone and I think the word count was about 250. It seems senseless but it was necessary for the future scenes. Another critique, when you're writing about the past, keep your tenses in the past. Lastly, rewrite the third chapter and start showing some actions. Readers want action. You can get all this information either online or in how-to books. Google Write Great Fiction. There are several books on what I mention. Also, if you want to take online classes, Writer's Digest is one, but pricey because the teacher will review your work and tell you what you need to improve. Skillshare has classes on writing too. Write on, that's one way to learn and read what you like to write. Let me know when the next chapter comes out."
