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Loved it.

"I liked the realism, and how there was no way for Nick to become a merman. I also liked that there were other merpeople who had decided to stay on land to help the others. I love everything about the ocean including merpeople. This is a wonderfully written novel. I'll happily read it again. "

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Great Book

"Overall, I really enjoyed reading your book and can tell that you are a talented author. However, I do believe you can improve. Title and Cover- Both are amazing, but you might want to consider making the author's name larger or more visible so that it's easier to see. Also, the word "me" needs to be capitalized. Blurb- Also amazing! It sounds very professional. The Chapters- There are only three things that I think you can improve on. 1. Personally, I don't think the quote and the prologue are necessary. 2. You might want to consider shortening some of your paragraphs. 3. Consider using text breaks- without it, readers will be confused when there is a scene change. Take Me to the Deepest Blue is a beautifully written unique story. I highly recommend it to everyone! -Author of The Tale of the King"

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