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More Please?
"Can i first say that it's refreshing to find a novel on Inkitt that's not about two straight kids staring at each other? Second, i need to say that this story is SERIOUSLY good. I don't like to leave reviews on stories with only 1 chapter because there's usually so little work with, but this first chapter immersed the reader PERFECTLY into world and plot of the protagonist. There wasn't a wasted word it any slow points at all. My only suggestion is to maybe italicize the flashback portions? There were a few points where I had to reread a sentence or two to figure out when it was taking place. Even that considered, this has a lot of potential! I can't wait to read more!"
Loved!
"Your book is phenomenal! I loved everything, though I don’t know if I could handle being cheated on by someone whom I loved for 12 years, let alone that person being my wife. I can’t wait for more chapters!"
