Daddy the Strong

"I loved this little one-shot. I also have a soft spot for daddy-Sasuke, well, Sasuke in general but daddy-Sasuke is so darn sweet. I did notice a few word errors, you might want to reread it for them, but otherwise I thought it was well written, it told me enough without going overboard and overwhelming me. Keep writing! You have talent. Ann (AKA Lady)"