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What is your opinion?
The cursed fire
"I love the plott its full of drama and mystery, and the character a really creative!"
Cursed Fire
"First off, loved the idea of a cursed fire not killing you right away. Secondly, thank you for the mention. Looking forward to reading more."
Good story idea
"Overall, the story idea is very interesting, though I feel like a lot of it happened really fast, you could slow down the pacing a little. My only other suggestion is maybe combining and/or extending some of the chapters, since the majority of them are pretty short(maybe give some backround on Emma and Grace's friendship?). There are also a few spelling/grammar errors, but nothing too distracting. Other than that, I feel like the story idea is good, but with some minor editing it could be even better."
