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Cool classic plot twist!

"Hi again :D You got my second vote ever! I know this kind of story is not new, and it's not my first time reading this kind of plot twist, but I love it anyway! I don't expect the ending that Jacob was the 'bad guy' and I love how you end the story with 'history repeating'. The scene when Tyler ended up running to the orphanage again really got me. It was scary to imagine! I couldn't think of any bad thing to write here, but maybe some people will think the chapters are too short, which is actually my preference. Anyway, great job :D Regards, Kei Angelus P.S. : I found a typo around chapter 3 or 4, but I can't remember which one (sorry for not pointing out)."

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