What is your opinion?
Lilieth's Garden
"Another promising horror story. The reason why naexecute well ang kwento ay dahil naestablish din nang maayos ang main emotion which is fear. This is very crucial. The plot may have been quite a cliche pero nairaos pa rin dahil sa maayos na character development, plotting, and plot twists. Nagdevelop din gradually ang tension sa story. In fact, ito 'yong horror story na masasabi mong pwede mong i-imagine as a short film. It's easy to visualize the story based sa pagkaka-narrate and dialogues. Hindi lang talaga ganoon kalinis ang technical aspect but that's okay, Madali namang maayos ang technical aspect through proofreading and editing. Writing style is okay but needs more improvement pa. Overall, the story is good. It only needs further tweaking pa lalo sa technical aspect. My suggetions: Attend the writing workshop of Binhi Pub on December 8 para mas mag-improve ka pa sa writing skills mo:)"
Lilieth's Garden
"You made this bettee if i-edit ito. This story had a potential kaso mas okay kung ni Third person POV mo nalang siya. Wala akong naging problema sa plot. Maaayos pa natin ito."
Lilieth's Garden
"This is what you call, a Horror story. Kapag naiimagine mo ang mga scene, for the faint hearted readers ay kikilabutan ka talaga. I like the plot kahit cliché na `yong mga revenge thingy. For the punctuations, know its proper way kung lalagyan ba ng ganito o ganyan. Grammar is good. Technicalities ay hindi naman talaga maiiwasan and I understand it. Edit lang ang kulang. All in all, It's a good story. Thank you."
