What is your opinion?
Detective witch
"On to book 3 , really enjoyed this storey especially the characters. Never knowing what's next. "
Suzanne Gingricy
"Having a hard time putting the book down. It is really good. I feel sorry for Val. I really like Nick and everyone wants the hero to be a good guy."
Val
"It's fine but it takes too long to get to the point. I've always liked Nick even though what they were doing with Val was wrong. But at this point, I think I'm on their side because the coven is the one acting like the devil worshipers "
Editing definitely needed
"Apart from the grammar, spelling and punctuation errors, it's very hard to read when whole sections are missing. Chapter 24 is missing part of the beginning and seems to start in the middle of the sentence. Chapter 26 is very confusing right from the beginning as part of the story seems to be missing in more than once instance right from the very beginning. I think I'm going to stop and hopefully you will come make the required repairs. Let me know as I would like to finish reading it but right now, it's so disjointed that it's giving me a headache trying to keep up with what's happening."
