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Rejected Mate

"Liked cliff hangers at end of chapters. Keeps you wanting more. Technical skills need a little work. Like the plot. "

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Love It

"I actually love everything it’s sad though that you had to discontinue it but you have major talent and I know I wouldn’t mind reading more of your books 😇"

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Great so far!

"I really like the story so far, the idea of a mate rejecting another is something new to me. Usually it's the other way around. I know this is your first attempts at writing and I think you've gotten off to a good start :) I love reading so I can follow your ideas and dialogue, however I think you could maybe try separating dialogue from actions because it seems all jumbled together sometimes. Other than that, I really like the idea, can't wait for an update 👍"

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Nice

"This novel is a great idea. "

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Nice quick read

"Easy read to pass the time. Plot could be a bit more detailed, however it's an enjoyable read."

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The Rejected Soulmate

"First of all, it's my first time to read a fiction story that talks about werewolves. It's an interesting one. There are a few misspelled words but you won't notice it as you continue on reading. I also suggest you fix the indention of each paragraph. But as a whole, you did it very well. Continue writing this kind of genre."

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