SecondHandBoyFriend

I'm a simple guy lingering beneath the glimmering ray of sunlight, the wonderful beauty of moonlight, and shade of dark night. This is my passion. Welcome to my world!

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Black Water

This is another interesting story. I'm intrigued by the title itself. It's a fresh start. It promises you to read more. I just hope you continue the consistency of the story flow. Keep it up.

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Before The Flower Withers

It's a good start. The way you tell every description of your story is really amazing. I can imagine every detail. Continue writing this story. It's great!

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Discoveries

Honestly, the title didn't catch my attention. It was like another boring story of story-telling bla-bla-bla. But, no it isn't! I thought I will stop reading until those flying "arrows" in the first part and the struggle of the character to escape from something or whatever got my interest. This is something amazing that I want to read more. Especially that this kind of genre is my preference. Continue updating this one. Surely, it'll catch more readers. Keep it up!

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I Promise

You will love reading this story. For me, many (if not all) of readers can relate to the roles that the characters portray. Nat, for example, who never lose hope and did not give up for his love. I think this deserves to become a good novel., rather than just a short one. It has a good plot. Keep it up!

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There where darkening begins (Book 1)

Amazing narration. Well organized sequence of events. You'll also feel the emotions of the characters. You won't let go each scene. It's becoming intense as you read along. It seems that we're in same line of genre as a writer. I like the writing style. Just maintain the consistency. Cheers for more chapters. A job well done!

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Black Hollow

The story will not let you miss every detail. Everything was smoothly done. The narration was very good. You will really understand and imagine the things that the writer wanted to tell. The second part was quite short, but still, it was awesome. You have a hand. Keep it up!

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Love or Hate

No need to apologize for being not an English expert in writing. What's most important is when you put a heart in your story, in which you really did it. Errors are just fine, so long as the story itself is delivered well to the readers. I enjoyed it. It's worth reading. Keep it up.

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The Rejected Soulmate

First of all, it's my first time to read a fiction story that talks about werewolves. It's an interesting one. There are a few misspelled words but you won't notice it as you continue on reading. I also suggest you fix the indention of each paragraph. But as a whole, you did it very well. Continue writing this kind of genre.

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