Inkitt
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"Well, I didn’t see any character development in this story. What about the protagonist? About her life? Her ambitions? And her love interest? Tell something about that man. Describe him. Grow and develop the characters. As a dominant myself, I chose to read this book. And only we know that it's always the submissives who hold the real power."

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I'm enjoying the ride

"Good story so far. I don't like the backward chapters titles bit I got over that. Interesting plot nice story, but some grammar issues, but not distracting. Waiting for the next installment"

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