What is your opinion?
Loners
"I’m loving how you’re building up the events and how you’re proceeding with them. I can’t wait to get to the base of the story and I really hope you upload soon. You might want to fix the grammatical mistakes but they aren’t something that take from the beauty of the story. Keep up the amazing work! "
Great so far
"I'm really liking this story so far, I feel very much for the characters and I can't wait to get into the meat of this story. There's only one critique though, which is more about the punctuation than the plot. Some commas are placed in the wrong areas and some commas aren't placed at all. The two rhetorical questions in this story are without question marks"
Great start!
"I like how this story is building up so far! I especially like how each character that has been introduced thinks and functions very differently. There are some grammatical errors, but you can always fix those later. Keep on writing!"
Loners
"I think the plot so far is awesome! I need a support group like that XD Constructive criticism: Everything is going by really fast, it might be nice to slow it down a little. Over all, I'm excited to see what happens next and I recommend this to any lonely teenage outcasts."
