Tate Cocotos

An artist writing the novel that's been sitting in my head for years. For art of the characters, visit the instagram page linked below!

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Blew Me Away

While I have only just started this book, I decided to go ahead and write a review since I am confident that the story will progress just as well as it began. When I say that this woman is a professional writer, I mean it. Everything is nailed down perfectly, and there isn't a moment of boredom when reading. Definitely give this book a try! You won't regret it!

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Very Unique and Well-done

This is exactly the type of story I was looking for-- by which I mean it is nothing I could have predicted. The plot, characters, and lore are all totally unique, and the story itself is unconventional and refreshing. A delight to read! Looking forward to more!

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So far so good :)

While there are definitely plenty of grammatical errors, this is shaping up nicely. The author did a nice job introducing the characters and laying out their personalities, basic home lives, and relationships. I would suggest doing a bit more "show, not tell" to keep the readers more engaged. However, this is shaping up to be an interesting story. :)

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Star-crossed lovers

Though this is a poem to accompany a story, I can understand it just perfectly on its own. Great story and you even managed to make it rhyme, which I know can take a lot of time and effort. Keep writing!

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Great start!

I like how this story is building up so far! I especially like how each character that has been introduced thinks and functions very differently. There are some grammatical errors, but you can always fix those later. Keep on writing!

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Different and Interesting

This is very interesting in the way that it is written: more like a movie than a traditional novel. The concept is also an intriguing one. Personally, this is not my type of book, mostly just because I prefer sci fi and fantasy to dramas, but that has nothing to do with the quality of the book. In fact, I can tell it is one that many people will enjoy. Very nicely done. Keep writing!

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Wonderful Story

This book is very good at shaping the main character's experiences and emotions, so that the reader feels empathy for her and is invested in the story. The pacing is, in my opinion, the most well-done aspect of this book. Everything flows properly and nothing is ever boring. I was a little confused about the first chapter, but rewrites and editing can always help to clarify where first drafts fall short. Definitely give this story a read if you haven't already! I'm looking forward to more!

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Very Touching

I love how short yet impactful these stories are! They are simple yet have distinct storylines and emotional arcs. My favorite is chapter two! There are a few grammatical/spelling errors, but those can be easily fixed. Definitely give this collection a read if you haven't yet!

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Great Mythology

I love books about merfolk, period. The writer is clearly quite good at their craft as well. I haven't gotten very far in the book yet, but I love the mythology and use of latin throughout. Just personally, I feel the book is a little cliché with the whole "soulmates" concept, but I know tons of people love reading this kind of thing, so it doesn't make it bad in the least. It's just a personal preference.

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Very well written

The author clearly knows what they are doing. The story flows nicely and the style is great. I'll be honest, it makes me a little uncomfortable that they are now step-siblings, but that's just me. I won't continue reading just because straight up romance isn't really my genre, but for someone who does enjoy it, this is sure to make them happy! Great job, keep writing!

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The Mysterious Core...

This story is shaping up nicely to be a solid dystopian story. It has good world building and concepts, such as the Core and Guardians. The one thing I might work on is clarifying why the main character attacked one of the guardians. I get that it was impulsive, but maybe include some background as to what makes him so angry right in that moment, so it makes more sense. Obviously the main character is a clever guy, so make it clear that his impulsiveness does not equate to stupidity. Nice job crafting the main character, though; he is the kind of fellow you'd want to get behind! Definitely a quality you want in a protagonist!

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Zoi

I feel that this is a deeply personal and emotional work. There is so much to convey. My only critique would be that the fancy language could be, in some places, switched out for more simpleton descriptions, just to keep your readers with you for the ride. Keep writing!

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Blaise is hilarious

Blaise's sense of humor is just priceless. It is impressive how quickly the author has crafted strong personalities for the characters. This story has great pacing, character introductions, and overall flow. It's a creative, solid story and gets you hooked right away. My only suggestion would be to "dumb down" the language a bit from time to time, just to keep the reader engaged with the fancily written paragraphs (which are excellent and quite clever) when they do come up. A little more balance is all I'd suggest. Other than that, this book is fantastic so far! Keep on writing!

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Amazing!

This short story is definitely worth reading! It has great pacing, first of all. New writers, including myself, often struggle with this, but here it is done exceptionally well. The plot is suspenseful and you feel empathy for the main character. There are also some great lines that resonated really well with me in this story. Excellent work! Keep writing!

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